I'm writing this with a heavy heart. I'm not sure I'm happy with my group's business pitch that we did on yesterday :-( We honestly had a brilliant idea and thought we conveyed it well. The assessors said it was a nice idea but it needs work. I was a bit upset but I know constructive criticism when I see it! We just need to  go through our idea and find those loop holes. Nothing will ever make me so down I can't pick myself up. I'll be entering a world where people gave up a dream because someones said no or told them they're not good enough. I'll be danged if I'll end up such a person. School is too hard and too much money has been spent to get me to this point. Plus I have people who believe in Suelan and that includes Suelan herself :-)